Actionable feedback, fast.
the Jab is a copy + conversion-focused recorded audit of one (1) page of your website
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Get fresh recs on...
everything that affects conversions, including:
Copy (duh)
Stumped on reasons why your copy isn’t converting? In our recorded audit, I’ll talk through ideas to:
- Better focus the copy around the reader’s pains or problems
- Add more important, right-fit messaging into the page at crucial points
- Improve the stickiness and urgency of headlines and CTAs
- Cut, tighten, and clarify
- Format for better readability
- And a lot of other things!
Design
If Copy is Baby, Design is Johnny Castle (AKA Patrick Swayze). Ain’t no one getting that final conversion lift without Design’s sculpted arms raising Copy into the air so she can soar.
… OK, so I’ve never seen Dirty Dancing. What I have seen? Hundreds — maybe even thousands — of websites with decent copy that’s getting absolutely stomped on or overshadowed by poor design.
User experience
You know how sometimes, a really important button will just disappear from your website and you don’t know until someone tells you years later? Just me?
Button Houdinis aside, UX is about guiding users toward desired actions and removing obstacles in their way — while making sure they’re enjoying themselves. UX is the mortal enemy of unnecessary steps, weird form formatting, unclear error messages, and broken shiz.
“Brilliant!”
I just watched, and I am already super grateful to have your eyes on this. Brilliant! ; )
Olivia Martinez
LadySuite
Licensed to kill
(On stage and in your page analytics)
Why am I qualified to give feedback on your website? I’m a Copy Hackers-certified Conversion Copywriter, a conversion optimization nerd, AND a practicing comedian.
In Basic Bitch terms, this means I can write fun, funny copy that actually converts.
Because if it doesn’t convert, what are we both doing here?
“10/10″
“As with everything Lianna does, I’d give this a 10/10. She made me a 20-min video full of funny, little gold nuggets that I can sprinkle onto my homepage. My homepage will (finally!) develop that cool girl personality I’ve always wanted — huge win. Thank you, Lianna.
And you! I can feel you thinking about this offer — I’m telling you don’t have to think anymore. Just click over to checkout, pull out your credit card & desperately hope she still has spots available (like I did!)
Deya Aliaga Kuhnle
DBM Bootcamp
SNAP Copy
Small copy jobs done fast and well. No project too teensy, and no revisions →
Conversion Comedy
Your life and your copy will never be the same →
Dumb Shit on Bluesky
ranked #1 for “funny copywriter” (i killed all the others) →
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