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Before

(Scroll down for the After)

Not bad! But missing out on some key copy-tunities to answer the all-important question in the header, and veering dangerously close to corporate jargon.

RugPadUSA Before Punchline Copy Uppercut

 


After

More conversational copy. Wording pulled directly from customer reviews. Boring headers turned into persuasive copy. Hell yeah.

RugPadUSA After Punchline Copy Uppercut

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